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Good animation but. . .

I like the general idea, but the thing that hurt my rating to you is the fact that the animation seemed a bit slow in parts. Mostly it was a timing issue for fme. But overall, well done.

Just Hilarious and Nostalgic!

So hilarious and awesome to see all these characters together and interacting with each other!
"Hope you drink a lot of Eggnog and Die!"

You Sir, Are Win, Oui!

Wow, you take the Cake with this animation, it's so well made WITH a hilarious plot! I also love how almost all the characters you run into have some sort of backstory instead of being just a plain old stock character.
The only thing that felt a little out of place was the Simpson's Yes Man, but I didn't let that affect my score to you.
Enjoy this shiny 10, you deserve it.

Still Needs Some Work Before you Reach the Gold

If I were to have rated on animation alone, I would have probably rated this between a 5 or a 6, but with your excellent camera angles and proper music choice, it helped raise my rating up to a 7.
Music:
As I said, two thumbs up on the music choice, very fitting,

Style:
The style of the art you used for your movie is very unique and would love it if you keep to it. (Did not affect my grading).

Camera (viewer's POV, etc):
Your skills with the angle and dramatic shots are really superior compared to many flashes I see here. Most of them usually just show a side angle where you really put that camera where it needed to be, because of this it helped save your score.

Animation:
This was probably your weakest feature in your movie.
Using about four frames to make hair and clothing movement repeatedly can get a bit repetitive and for the speed you were doing it it looked a bit lackluster, I would prescribe more frames for those.
Your dramatic stills were quite nice (except for the clothing fluttering in the wind) where the protagonist would pause after hey slayed an enemy.
Also, at the parts where a character's head was moving around, the animation seemed a bit jumpy and sloppy. This also applies to some of the other movements the characters made. (The sword and running sequences were the only exception to this).
The Biggest Problem I found was the fight sequence with the Boss Demon (the one who stopped the sword), where you used the SAME animation when he was attacking the demon over and over. This is what really hurt my score to you.

To close, I really believe that with some practice, patience, and more practice you could become a more well known traditional artist.
Some helpful tips would be to pay great attention to detail, ask yourself, "Is this animation cycle as smooth as I can make it?" And to also push yourself to your limit each time because your limit will expand after you reach it.
I look forward to more work from you.

On this site, I'm generally planning to be a voice actor. I have Flash but I'm too too much of a novice to submit anything worthwhile, so I'll be happy to lend you a voice if you need one.

Age 35, Male

Student

Ohio State University

Ohio

Joined on 12/19/09

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